Tuesday, November 27, 2007

Deadline 18, Outline

Thesis statement: The use of lead in the manufacturing of items has left the environment toxic and is harming both children and adults as a result.

I. Damaging to environment
II. Hazardous to children
III. Harmful to adults

Conclusion: The use of lead by the manufacturing industry has left behind problems for the environment, children, and adults that need to be addressed.

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